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Before attempting to write our own script, I've looked at the bbc script website and I'vechosen a script to annotate, identify techniques used and how we could incorporate this into our script to make our opening sequence effective/match the audience expectations of our genre.

 

EXT. ROADSIDE OPS 2 - DAY 4, 0900 1

We track along a road to discover NICK, near a T junction, on

his belt buckle, brushing dirt off an IED. We see orange wire.

 

NICK

(To himself:)

What the...?

He gets up and steps away from the device.

NICK (cont’d)

(On radio:)

Well, I haven’t seen a device this

clever since Iraq. Ever had the

feeling someone’s trying to kill you?

GORDON

(On radio:)

Well I’ve been to watch Leeds United

away at Old Trafford, so, yeah. 

NICK

(On radio:)

Helpful. Anyway, grab an evidence bag, we're taking this one home.

Script from BBC's 'Bluestone 42'

Character's name

Directions within actions

Conclusion/round up what he's said.

Continuing his actions

Brief description of setting and what's happening.

I've added a chunk from the script and began annotating it...

I've printed out the script & made annotations also...

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